Finding the focus and slowing down the "hot spot"

The part of my memoir that would be most interesting for readers is when we arrived at the grave site. A man gave us flowers to put on my great aunt's casket. We felt a great deal of grief. The most important part of my writing is the sense of emotion. There was sadness, closure, and surprise. This part is interesting to readers because it gives them a good clue how my family felt during this tragedy.